--- 10_datamngt.txt	2014-07-05 22:42:33.911994114 +0200
+++ 10_datamngt_proposal.txt	2014-07-05 23:49:09.483807020 +0200
@@ -68,6 +68,7 @@
 
 NOTE: `cpio`(1) is designed to be used with `find`(1) and other commands and suitable for creating backup scripts since the file selection part of the script can be tested independently.
 
+### HW: is the following line deprecated? Remove? Or mention Libreoffice...
 NOTE: Internal structure of OpenOffice data files are "`.jar`" file.
 
 ==== Copy and synchronization tools
@@ -215,7 +216,7 @@
 3. Exclude files matching regex of "`.\*\.cpio`" or "`.\*\~`" from search by stop processing
 4. Exclude directories matching regex of "`.\*/\.git`" from search by stop processing
 5. Exclude files larger than 99 Megabytes (units of 1048576 bytes) from search by stop processing
-6. Print filenames which satisfy above search conditions and newer than "`/path/to/timestamp`"
+6. Print filenames which satisfy above search conditions and are newer than "`/path/to/timestamp`"
 
 Please note the idiomatic use of "`-prune -o`" to exclude files in the above example.
 
@@ -340,7 +341,7 @@
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 network service                                                                                                                                  description of typical usage scenario
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-http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Server_Message_Block[SMB/CIFS] network mounted filesystem with http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samba_(software)[Samba] sharing files via "Microsoft Windows Network", see `smb.conf`(5) and http://www.samba.org/samba/docs/man/Samba-HOWTO-Collection/[The Official Samba 3.2.x HOWTO and Reference Guide] or the `samba-doc` package
+http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Server_Message_Block[SMB/CIFS] network mounted filesystem with http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samba_(software)[Samba] sharing files via "Microsoft Windows Network", see `smb.conf`(5) and http://www.samba.org/samba/docs/man/Samba-HOWTO-Collection/[The Official Samba 3.x.x HOWTO and Reference Guide] or the `samba-doc` package
 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Network_File_System_(protocol)[NFS] network mounted filesystem with the Linux kernel                                sharing files via "Unix/Linux Network", see `exports`(5) and http://tldp.org/HOWTO/NFS-HOWTO/index.html[Linux NFS-HOWTO]
 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hypertext_Transfer_Protocol[HTTP] service                                                                           sharing file between the web server/client
 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Https[HTTPS] service                                                                                                sharing file between the web server/client with encrypted Secure Sockets Layer (SSL) or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transport_Layer_Security[Transport Layer Security] (TLS)
@@ -428,10 +429,15 @@
 - The `rdiff-backup` package enables incremental (remote) backups.
 - The `dump` package helps to archive and restore the whole filesystem incrementally and efficiently.
 
-TIP: See files in "`/usr/share/doc/dump/`" and http://dump.sourceforge.net/isdumpdeprecated.html["Is dump really deprecated?"] to lean about the `dump` package.
+TIP: See files in "`/usr/share/doc/dump/`" and http://dump.sourceforge.net/isdumpdeprecated.html["Is dump really deprecated?"] to learn about the `dump` package.
 
 ==== An example script for the system backup
 
+### HW: /me personally is somewhat irritated, when I read to reinstall Debian once
+### HW: a year. Telling this to Linux newbies could make them think that this is
+### HW: strictly necessary, similar to Windows :-) But we are better, aren't we?
+### HW: Ok, this is probably not for newbie / desktop users, but probably reword
+### HW: this a bit?
 For a personal Debian desktop system running `unstable` suite, I only need to protect personal and critical data.  I reinstall system once a year anyway.  Thus I see no reason to backup the whole system or to install a full featured backup utility.
 
 I use a simple script to make a backup archive and burn it into CD/DVD using GUI.  Here is an example script for this.
@@ -556,7 +562,7 @@
 `cryptsetup`     @-@popcon1@-@ @-@psize1@-@ `cryptsetup`(8), ... utilities for http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dm-crypt[dm-crypto] block device encryption supporting http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Linux_Unified_Key_Setup[LUKS]
 `ecryptfs-utils` @-@popcon1@-@ @-@psize1@-@ `ecryptfs`(7), ...   utilities for http://ecryptfs.sourceforge.net/[ecryptfs] stacked filesystem encryption
 `coreutils`      @-@popcon1@-@ @-@psize1@-@ `md5sum`(1)          compute and check MD5 message digest
-`coreutils`      @-@popcon1@-@ @-@psize1@-@ `sha1sum`(1)         compute and checks SHA1 message digest
+`coreutils`      @-@popcon1@-@ @-@psize1@-@ `sha1sum`(1)         compute and check SHA1 message digest
 `openssl`        @-@popcon1@-@ @-@psize1@-@ `openssl`(1ssl)      compute message digest with "`openssl dgst`" (OpenSSL)
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@@ -574,8 +580,12 @@
 `gpg --gen-key`               generate a new key
 `gpg --gen-revoke my_user_ID` generate revoke key for my_user_ID
 `gpg --edit-key user_ID`      edit key interactively, "help" for help
-`gpg -o file --exports`       export all keys to file
-`gpg --imports file`          import all keys from file
+### HW: according to the man page this is --export (without s)
+### HW: AND: any reason why not keep the same style as in all other
+### HW: examples? (additional options at the end: gpg --export -o file)
+`gpg --export -o file`        export all keys to file
+### HW: according to the man page this is --import (without s)
+`gpg --import file`           import all keys from file
 `gpg --send-keys user_ID`     send key of user_ID to keyserver
 `gpg --recv-keys user_ID`     recv. key of user_ID from keyserver
 `gpg --list-keys user_ID`     list keys of user_ID
@@ -725,6 +735,10 @@
 
 ==== Extracting differences for source files
 
+### HW: In the next line "One of the following procedures ... ": wouldn't
+### HW: that mean that the other line does something different? 
+### HW: Since both commands do create a unified diff, better rephrase to
+### HW: "The following procedures extract ... "
 One of following procedures extract differences between two source files and create unified diff files "`file.patch0`" or "`file.patch1`" depending on the file location.
 
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@@ -906,12 +920,12 @@
 You can check out a Subversion repository at "`svn+ssh://svn.example.org/project/module/trunk`" to a local Git repository at "`./dest`" and commit back to the Subversion repository.  E.g.:
 
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-$ git svn clone -s -rHEAD svn+ssh://svn.example.org/project dest
+$ git-svn clone -s -rHEAD svn+ssh://svn.example.org/project dest
 $ cd dest
 ... make changes
 $ git commit -a
 ... keep working locally with git
-$ git svn dcommit
+$ git-svn dcommit
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 TIP: The use of "`-rHEAD`" enables us to avoid cloning entire historical contents from the Subversion repository.
@@ -999,6 +1013,9 @@
 Many public CVS servers provide read-only remote access to them with account name "`anonymous`" via pserver service.  For example, Debian web site contents are maintained by http://alioth.debian.org/projects/webwml/[webwml project] via CVS at Debian alioth service.  The following sets up "`$CVSROOT`" for the remote access to this CVS repository.
 
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+### HW: is cvs.alioth.debian.org still valid?
+### HW: According to https://www.debian.org/devel/website/using_cvs
+### HW: this is now anonscm.debian.org
 $ export CVSROOT=:pserver:anonymous@cvs.alioth.debian.org:/cvsroot/webwml
 $ cvs login
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@@ -1011,6 +1028,7 @@
 
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 $ export CVS_RSH=ssh
+### HW: anonscm.debian.org ? See above.
 $ export CVSROOT=:ext:account@cvs.alioth.debian.org:/cvs/webwml
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